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61. 13 May 2009 17:02 | ||
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62. 13 May 2009 17:31 | ||
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I loved "Sanctuary", absolutely loved it. I would love to read the longer version, but I like it just the way it is, even without the explanation. |
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63. 13 May 2009 18:00 | ||
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Ron, so glad to see you back writing again. I had an idea of where "Sanctuary" was going, but I appreciated the explanation as it brought things clear. It makes me want to read the original story that inspired you and your original long version. I also enjoyed your other story too, sort of reminded me of being a teachers pet (though I very rarely ever wore toga's to school) |
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64. 13 May 2009 18:21 | ||
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This is an official stardate entry and may be quoted as such. |
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65. 13 May 2009 18:24 | ||
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Funny that you say stardate entry given the subject of my next story. I decided to do one that was made up of nothing but what 2 characters were saying to one another, I've never done that before so I hope it turned out alright. Here goes, 172 words not including title. |
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66. 13 May 2009 18:27 | ||
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I was a little inspired on this one by the Captain from one of the Hitchhikers Guide books who spent all his time in a lovely bathtub situated on the bridge of his ship. I could imagine him having a similar conversation. |
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67. 13 May 2009 20:54 | ||
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68. 14 May 2009 04:27 | ||
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Ron, you created this idea ... hope you keep it going until I'm too old to read (and longer). |
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69. 14 May 2009 04:39 | ||
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That totally has a Hitchhiker's Guide feel to it, I like it quite a bit. |
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70. 14 May 2009 11:38 | ||
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"Timing" |
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71. 14 May 2009 11:53 | ||
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"Timing" (alternate ending) |
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72. 14 May 2009 13:48 | ||
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Oh five! Wow! |
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73. 14 May 2009 13:50 | ||
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Oops... |
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74. 14 May 2009 15:01 | ||
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75. 14 May 2009 15:16 | ||
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wow, what a difference with the two different endings...and I must say again, I simply love the way you do dialog! |
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76. 14 May 2009 15:16 | ||
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Thanks. |
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77. 14 May 2009 15:18 | ||
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Solosater, I had an English teacher who taught us that writers know when to break rules of grammar. He used started a sentence with "And" or "But" for effect or voice as an example. |
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78. 14 May 2009 15:23 | ||
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Dragon ... definitely sounds like British sci-fi spoof. Nicely done. |
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79. 14 May 2009 15:27 | ||
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Ron, what about alternate "afters" (parallel universe and all) and how do you avoid the paradox of seeing yourself. Love the idea, was a little lost, though. Some stories do need more words than we are allowing |
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80. 14 May 2009 16:40 | ||
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"Sweet Revenge" |