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41. 26 Mar 2010 04:32 | ||
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Doug, when I saw the title 'A single Tear' I thought you'd finally given away to the shmaltz faries. It's good and sweet with your usual edginess. Spring fever does unusual things. It ends up pensive and thoughtful. |
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42. 26 Mar 2010 07:40 | ||
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Wow Giraffe! "At Last" is wow... I don't know, but it is making me think, reminds me of the crusades. Very good. |
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43. 26 Mar 2010 14:05 | ||
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Okay, here is my update. 309 words with title |
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44. 26 Mar 2010 14:11 | ||
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Hahaha, That is amazing LadyHwin! I love it!!! |
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45. 26 Mar 2010 14:31 | ||
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Thank you, Nyle!!! Lot's of fun writing it, your paragraph especially! : ) |
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46. 26 Mar 2010 16:58 | ||
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Very good and thoughfully creative, Ladyhwin. Can't you make me more normal though? I thought I was just a normal kind of guy. Waah. Waah. |
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47. 26 Mar 2010 17:26 | ||
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Also lots who come and go. |
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48. 26 Mar 2010 18:43 | ||
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I probably could giraffe. I guess I was just writing from my opinion of everyone's stories and the first things that came to mind. : ) My second poem this week... : D |
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49. 26 Mar 2010 20:46 | ||
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Never before have I complained about a word count being too short. Generally over 300 is too much for me...but this little rant ended up at 540 words before I butchered it. Here it is, 309, not including the title. (and yes, I kinda cheated with emblem). |
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50. 26 Mar 2010 21:14 | ||
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wow...I just caught up with everything you guys have been writing and my mind's practically swimming. Maybe I'll have something coherent to say about it in the morning... |
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51. 26 Mar 2010 23:39 | ||
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Adding emblem that way shows an intact sense of humor. Maybe nothing's above humor - even fate. |
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52. 27 Mar 2010 02:51 | ||
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Umm, erm ... we don’t want Qsilv feeling sad about Miranda ... so, Doug, please forgive this bit of silly fun. Marius offers chapter two to your "A Single Tear." (goes off giggling just because it’s fun to giggle.) |
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53. 27 Mar 2010 02:54 | ||
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Rats - a tense problem ... should read, "Mangoe is watching the Jasmine Tea. He’s not had food or beverage in years, doesn't want to, and it seems such an activity would be beneath an Archangel." Ahhh ... not tense about that now! |
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54. 27 Mar 2010 03:06 | ||
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giraffe, "At Last" ... well now, marius thinks there is no more need to give warnings 'when bad things happen to kittens' as the trauma in your story was a notch, or two, beyond that. (If folks want to talk about this - would be interested in hearing because no desire for others to find offense and/or wish they'd not read a particular story. Anyone?) Enjoyed your exploring of someone doing something in which they aren't 100% invested and later struggling with his betrayal of values, desires. Wished, or felt, your story could have gone longer, had more room to develop this man's ... um, situation. |
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55. 27 Mar 2010 03:08 | ||
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meant to type: Seems a perfect fit! : ) |
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56. 27 Mar 2010 03:09 | ||
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And just for fun, giraffe ... BOO! |
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57. 27 Mar 2010 05:56 | ||
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BOO, yerself. Yer the one who brought Miranda back to life (kind a). I figger if I give a warning bout the words in my head, most folks'd just look more close at 'em. If I say "Beware of them here words" do you just pass on to the next story? Nah. Ya read it anyways. |
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58. 27 Mar 2010 07:14 | ||
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Oh dear marius: Tinkering with my story in such a "redneck" way. No if I had another chapter or another 200+ words her grave marker would have been in that field. She was looking on after her death, ghostess to the mostest.. Thought your addition to it was funny. I need to figger out how to get some sleep... |
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59. 27 Mar 2010 07:19 | ||
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midnight: on "fate"...the best part and the most relevant is that people say "everything happens for a reason" ie. fate. Its the most cockamamie BS known to man. Its something you use religiously or when you just don't know what to say. People tell my wife and I that God wouldn't have given you two children with Cystic Fibrosis if you weren't able to handle it and "it happens for a reason. Tell that to my therapist. Ooops, getting a bit too personal, but your story hit a "nerve" with me which I applaud you for because isn't that one of the purposes of writing? |
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60. 27 Mar 2010 07:22 | ||
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ladyhwin: The suck up to Q was too noticeable. lol. |