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21. 9 Jul 2010 02:17 | ||
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Doug. No offense, but that seemed to capsulize the shallow part of relationships. The cars, the shoes, the deodorant. I think that was your intention - not sure. |
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22. 9 Jul 2010 08:17 | ||
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giraffe: Twas supposed to be a humorous tale of purchasing a vehicle. Guess the humor got lost in the shuffle. Sorry. I bought that 2011 Sorento on Tuesday and it was parked out in front of the house as a surprise for the wife. Buying a car is crazy nowadays. Now you can research everything from A to Z on the internet before going out to a dealer and finding the one that really impresses you. Between going to the eye doctor and getting my first prescription for bi-focals to winding up buying an SUV I had a full day and didn't sleep before I went to work. Probably explains the next days scatter-brained humorless diatribe. I love bhughes list and I'll give it another try. |
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23. 9 Jul 2010 15:06 | ||
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Phew, it's been a while! Finally managed to think and write something. |
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24. 9 Jul 2010 18:20 | ||
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Doug. I'm glad you are lightening things up for a while. I know the storm's a-comming. The humor wasn't lost on me. |
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25. 9 Jul 2010 18:38 | ||
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Shanley, That one reminds me of Joseph Smith carrying around gold bars in a shoe box that no one was allowed to see. When people demanded to see them. they miraculously disappeared. That made him a saint. Google Joseph Smith. |
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26. 9 Jul 2010 19:20 | ||
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Shanley...I'm intrigued... |
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27. 10 Jul 2010 06:55 | ||
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Great stories everyone !! |
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28. 10 Jul 2010 11:08 | ||
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Thank you for sharing your impressions on my story, Giraffe & MidnightPoet. Having only 250 words at my disposal, made the challenge more interesting. Nice to see that symbolism is still intriguing |
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29. 10 Jul 2010 15:45 | ||
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Shanley, most of us have authors that we felt were ignored. One of mine is Mary Renault. She was reaching across gender boundaries. |
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30. 10 Jul 2010 16:28 | ||
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I'm out of town all next week. I'll check in when I can. |
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31. 11 Jul 2010 06:34 | ||
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Hm, never heard of her before, but considering the good recommendation, I became curious enough and wrote down the name to my memory. |
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32. 11 Jul 2010 07:44 | ||
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200 words including title... |
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33. 11 Jul 2010 23:34 | ||
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It's short, but all the words are there in order. |
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34. 12 Jul 2010 02:00 | ||
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250 words, not including the title. Advertise has become advertising. Hope that's ok. |
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35. 12 Jul 2010 08:24 | ||
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WOW Morshy! That was great. Loved the tag line "Are you relevant". Shot dead in a sting operation? Crazy! Loved your descriptions in the first paragragh. They are a gem. |
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36. 12 Jul 2010 08:28 | ||
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Doug...I loved that you used ginormous in a story. That is an awesome word. |
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37. 12 Jul 2010 09:14 | ||
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Oh midnight...you showed up just in time...250 words no title |
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38. 12 Jul 2010 09:15 | ||
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midnight: Much better description of giraffe's story that I did. You were right on the mark, but as he said, he is "out of town" and maybe he is struggling just to join us. Keep that whip handy though...oh marius! Where are you...??? I have a little bitty scare for youuuuuuuu. |
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39. 12 Jul 2010 09:17 | ||
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see what happens when your russian (on purpose) that -t +N |
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40. 12 Jul 2010 09:24 | ||
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very nice, Doug. I knew something scary was coming...your story wove well to that point. I think it would have been more effective, though, if you gave a description beyond 'broken and bloody'. |