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21. 27 May 2009 16:33 | ||
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Yay! entries! I am so excited. |
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22. 27 May 2009 16:58 | ||
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Dragon, amazing story, kind of has an ethereal feel to it. And five, I'm always impressed with how much story you can put into mostly dialogue. And you both did a great job integrating those words! I'm really enjoying this. |
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23. 28 May 2009 03:04 | ||
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24. 28 May 2009 18:48 | ||
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/hugs solo |
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25. 28 May 2009 19:36 | ||
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Great submissions so far, as always. |
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26. 28 May 2009 20:55 | ||
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Just realized I posted that under my dad's name. I'm on his comp @ work. |
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27. 28 May 2009 21:26 | ||
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I am not good with grammar so I will apologies now. |
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28. 29 May 2009 00:38 | ||
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I am glad the word is there, it has made this a very fun challenge. it was just a trying word!! |
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29. 29 May 2009 08:26 | ||
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I liked that LaDonna. Great use of undulating! |
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30. 29 May 2009 09:57 | ||
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31. 29 May 2009 09:59 | ||
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I feel I should note that the Amber sea is an inland freshwater sea (so pretty much a big lake) I wouldn't want you thinking she's leading goats down to drink salt water. He he. |
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32. 29 May 2009 20:21 | ||
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Ladonna, I totally enjoyed your story and keep chuckling at your last line about getting his head out of the cellar! I don't know why, but I just loved that line! |
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33. 30 May 2009 09:51 | ||
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Well, my long work weekend hours loom, so the time has come for decision-making. This torch-bearer job is difficult, because it's so hard to decide on a winner. I really like every entry, and all for different reasons. SabraAngel, your Dreamland series is full of suspense and danger. And ZeroMerc, you Prophecy series has some of those same qualities, with an old-world European feel to it. Five, you are a genius with dialogue, and Dragon, you make this writing stuff look easy, you're so talented at it. But I have to say, LaDonna's story just kind of cracked me up. Very human, and maybe the best use of undulating I saw here! The grammar and punctuation wasn't perfect, as she had warned, but the story was entertaining to the max! So, with apologies to everyone else who deserves to bear a torch, I am choosing LaDonna as our next torchbearer! Congratulations LaDonna! |
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34. 30 May 2009 12:26 | ||
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Congrats LaDonna an a very deserving win. I also very much enjoyed your story. |
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35. 31 May 2009 15:18 | ||
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I think I totally missed this iteration. I'll have to make up for it in the next one. I haven't read anything from this week. I'll try to play catch-up I promise. |