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I think I totally missed this iteration. I'll have to make up for it in the next one. I haven't read anything from this week. I'll try to play catch-up I promise. |
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Congrats LaDonna an a very deserving win. I also very much enjoyed your story. |
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Well, my long work weekend hours loom, so the time has come for decision-making. This torch-bearer job is difficult, because it's so hard to decide on a winner. I really like every entry, and all for different reasons. SabraAngel, your Dreamland series is full of suspense and danger. And ZeroMerc, you Prophecy series has some of those same qualities, with an old-world European feel to it. Five, you are a genius with dialogue, and Dragon, you make this writing stuff look easy, you're so talented at it. But I have to say, LaDonna's story just kind of cracked me up. Very human, and maybe the best use of undulating I saw here! The grammar and punctuation wasn't perfect, as she had warned, but the story was entertaining to the max! So, with apologies to everyone else who deserves to bear a torch, I am choosing LaDonna as our next torchbearer! Congratulations LaDonna! |
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Ladonna, I totally enjoyed your story and keep chuckling at your last line about getting his head out of the cellar! I don't know why, but I just loved that line! |
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I feel I should note that the Amber sea is an inland freshwater sea (so pretty much a big lake) I wouldn't want you thinking she's leading goats down to drink salt water. He he. |