Doug

marius: If you ever need a "designed" story, let me know. lol.

Shanley

Erm...I can see the challenge has got its winner, yet my inspiration could not rest tonight, so I shall post its result just for the sake of one well spent hour:
368 words -title

'Truth of love '

You keep your balance just for me,
And never tremble despite your many phobias.
You stay obtuse in the most delightful way,
To all that meaningless mean fibrous thinking.
Your soul always giving me the jink,
You heart unmoved to any word easily said.
Baring the justice, yet never forgiving the truth,
Letting me serious, just like a priest before his candle soon lit.
I take it no more. I breathe, I dream,
Cold soul, longing for love, yet ignoring all the essence of life.
I am but joy, fears I don’t understand!
I never hold back to an ‘I love you’,
Yet here I am, desperately lost in silence.
My words you never obey, my thoughts you would never even listen!
Your quest for truth brings but pain to my eyes,
Yet daymare after daymare, I never cease to daydream that fortunate time
When thy shall rise your soul above your mind, your love over the reasoning.
Be sure to let your eyes cover me,
When the moment comes…
I live but for thee,
You breathe but for the divine!
I cannot change you, nor do I dare
To set this goal…it would take me 7 lives, but how I’d make you glare!
You say you understand, yet I see you eyes closed tight.
You say you hear me, but your thoughts wander through stars.
Embraced by silence, embarassed by the sight,
I humbly watch how you give yourself to the sky,
My tears are useless, my words just lies,
I am but a milestone holding you down.
Collusion of the universe, something I could never touch,
Despite the way you make me feel, I’m haunted by your crown
Of things that I used to love so much…
If you’re so fair, if you’re so wise,
Won’t you answer this silly question, dilemma of my life:
Where’s the truth when you can’t find
The reason to believe
There is truth in every lie,
There is beauty in every eye…
For words are just the mirror of a world,
Rising from your heart to above,
Not to hold you down, but to make them behold
Your inner world, what pretty sight
Small being wearing, clothes…your only true fault!

ladyhwin

um... thank you Doug.... wow, cabbage and rye bread.... give me a day to recover...

giraffe

Thanks Doug. I'm not bowing out. I just don't have time to be Torch Bearer this month. Not that I would be, just a heads up that I'd be bad at it with time limitations this week and next.

Nylecoj

Congratulations Ladyhwin!!!!!