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41. 1 Apr 2010 17:50 | ||
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giraffe, I'm sure I've read Strangers but I can't quite remember the story. I find I have trouble putting his title to the stories. I think my favorite one Koontz book was Intensity. It was well named, it started with a bang and just kept coming. I had a terrible time putting it down to go to sleep, I just had to know what happened next. |
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42. 2 Apr 2010 04:21 | ||
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Strangers is the one where different people all over the US start having paranormal events and they all converge at a Motel in a small town. A little like 'The Stand' but the end makes sense. |
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43. 2 Apr 2010 06:05 | ||
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256 exluding title... |
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44. 2 Apr 2010 06:18 | ||
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giraffe: Just catching up a little....loved your "CaraVan" story. Really had me going. Your use of the word list or its "abuse" was so proper it was genius. I'm really proud of that one! |
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45. 2 Apr 2010 07:28 | ||
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Doug. I know you're a family man. I think stories like this come from the desire to amuse readers - not from some suppressed primal urge. Please agree with me on that. And I'll promise not to get the sex change. I'm a family man too. |
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46. 2 Apr 2010 08:04 | ||
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Where else do you get conversations like this? Thanks ThinkWrite. |
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47. 2 Apr 2010 10:40 | ||
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Okay, I finally wrote something. I "cheated" on Morrison, I used "more reason" hope that isn't pushing it to far. 256 words with the title. |
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48. 2 Apr 2010 11:01 | ||
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That is friggin gorgeous, Jocelyn. I especially liked Van Gogh as word usage. The result is something descriptive and visual. Pure thoughts and beautiful. Why didn't anyone get murdered, though? Just kidding. |
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49. 2 Apr 2010 11:31 | ||
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That was beautiful Joc, puts me right into spring. LOL at more reason = Morrison! |
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50. 3 Apr 2010 05:47 | ||
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Ditto Dragon's comment, Nylecoj! Spring (through November) is my favorite time of year ... and am thinking Spring is certainly a favorite time for you! Many lovely images: " the mist ...shining with a thousand mystic stars on the silver trunks of the trees," " The river flows through the forest like mirth bubbling from a girl’s heart," ... lovely tribute to Spring! Enjoyed! |
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51. 3 Apr 2010 06:30 | ||
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Thank you for your nice comments!! Glad you all enjoyed! Spring is definitely my favorite time of year. |
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52. 3 Apr 2010 06:52 | ||
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Yes giraffe I am a family man. Mom, dad, 2 kids, 1 dog and 2 cats who are moving out to Beverleee, which for us is out in the "boonies" as I call it next month. My mind may work in mysterious ways and I do love a good horror movie or book, but I'm about as straight laced as it goes. No tats, one pierced ear I got when I was 36 and work myself to death. The only thing I've ever killed were deer and I eat the meat. |
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53. 3 Apr 2010 06:55 | ||
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Nylecoj: Outstanding! (spring). Love the way you wind those long sentences into a definate flow of the story line and bring the reader into the story to feel ebb and flow. Very creative and I thought brilliant! |
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54. 3 Apr 2010 07:40 | ||
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256 words and Morrison becomes ... Morris on. (cheating is such fun.) |
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55. 3 Apr 2010 07:59 | ||
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marius.......hehe you do have a "dark" side don't you. That was delicious! Loved the way you used Morris on.....maybe I'm just a bit tired, but did you just write a piece with a priest murdering a priest?????? Or maybe the cat did it, or he just passssssed on. Anyway it was delightful! |
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56. 3 Apr 2010 08:17 | ||
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marius, nice one. I like the ambiguous ending making us wonder (like Doug asked) did a priest just get killed by another? or did he simply die? I also liked the way he so matter of factly took his vision. |
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57. 3 Apr 2010 10:11 | ||
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This word list just jumped out at me and as a result this little tale evolved - hope you enjoy it -- |
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58. 3 Apr 2010 12:41 | ||
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Very visual and creepy, Marius. I like the lighting. I won't go for the obvious sequel about sex scandals. That's to creepy for even ME. I think your priests were so obsessed with suppressing human desires, they were psychopathic. Just my opinion - no judgements. |
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59. 3 Apr 2010 13:00 | ||
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Doug. Also very visual, but not creepy. I expected a huge Easter bunny to come bounding through the camp. lol. I'm gonna have to try one of these visual stories. |
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60. 3 Apr 2010 16:17 | ||
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Doug, tee hee, doesn't everyone has a dark and shadowy side ... or two? |