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161. 18 Nov 2009 12:13

maddyjean08

Ok, let me get this straight. It was a dream, correct? I liked how in the possible dream you were a ghost hovering above your body. This really sucked my in, I love a good ghost story.

162. 18 Nov 2009 13:21

mouse

Matthew
Great story, you have a great literary gift. The out of body experience seemed so real. And the ending was not expected.

163. 18 Nov 2009 13:38

Shanley

Frightening story, Matthew. Luckily, the end takes us back to reality. I really enjoyed reading it.

164. 18 Nov 2009 13:44

maddyjean08

Yeah, ditto.

165. 18 Nov 2009 13:46

Nylecoj

Amazing matthew! I had to read it twice to make sure I was still awake! it was that gripping!

166. 18 Nov 2009 13:47

maddyjean08

Yeah, it's just awesome.

167. 18 Nov 2009 16:11

giraffe

Matthew, to me it was either a near-death experience or someone who actually dies and sees his long lost father. Considering the operating table and the blood, I think the latter. Very thought provoking

168. 18 Nov 2009 16:15

Dragon

Alrighty, I'm gonna close this for submissions now. There have been a shocking number of entries and a little controversy too so it might take me a little time to make my decision for Torch Bearer so bear with me. I'm going to go back through all the stories and reread them all, I know I'm going to be torn and have quite a time of deciding so I want to do this right.

169. 18 Nov 2009 17:04

Dragon

Okay, Torch passing time. I'm not going to go into each story, there were actually no less than 18 stories (not including my own) by 10 different writers (not including myself), so discussing each one would simply take too long. I will mention a few that really caught me up though, giraffe's poem sucked me in and had me reading and rereading it. matthew submitted more in this thread then I think he has in all the rest put together, my favorite of his being his last one titled Awakening, I loved the drifting quality of it. midnightpoet's The River was beautiful, I loved way I felt as if I were sitting on that riverbank forgeting about humanity when I read it, it really took me away. My choice for torchbearer is going to go to Nylecoj for her first tale, an untitled one. It was an amazing, complicated and yet simple story and the fact that it was all one long sentence kept me rapt, it was moving and so in line with what I was thinking when I chose the word list. So congrats Nylecoj and thanks to everyone who contributed!

170. 18 Nov 2009 18:24

giraffe

Good choice, Dragon. And thanks for all the fish (Douglas Adams).

171. 19 Nov 2009 01:52

marg

excellent choice, Dragon.. and thanks for the great list of words.. and now, CONGRATS to Nylecoj..!

172. 19 Nov 2009 03:40

maddyjean08

Yay, Nylecoj! What would be the next roman numeral? I haven't really learned.....

173. 19 Nov 2009 04:50

giraffe

maddy, it will be 28. (xxviii)

174. 19 Nov 2009 05:19

matthew

I was in a store last month where I saw a nice large clock... The numbers on it were a little disconcerting however... They read... I... II... III... IIII... IV... V... VI... VII... VIII... IX... X... XI... XII...

I thought it odd...

175. 19 Nov 2009 08:04

Nylecoj

WOW! Thank you!... Totally unexpected, wow...

176. 19 Nov 2009 08:28

midnightpoet

Congrats, Nylecoj!! You have a real talent