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101. 14 May 2010 00:07 | ||
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Ron. Some of them turn like the twigs on "flowers". Some don't. |
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102. 14 May 2010 00:11 | ||
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four two oh my funny, funny friend |
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103. 14 May 2010 00:17 | ||
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Cheers. I'm fortunate that MJ is legal in Denver. I didn't get the four two??? |
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104. 14 May 2010 00:19 | ||
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I'm out but 1st - 4-2 is the answer to life the universe and everything. Final words. |
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105. 14 May 2010 00:21 | ||
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Yes. I get it. |
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106. 14 May 2010 02:09 | ||
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318 words minus the title. Oh, and stratosphere has morphed. Slightly. Sorry 'bout that... |
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107. 14 May 2010 03:37 | ||
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Reality TV joins the judicial system? Too bad it's not that much of a stretch. Thunderdome? Good story, morshy. |
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108. 14 May 2010 05:36 | ||
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midnight: Referring back to comment #68 (I think).....you said it all. I'm still atching up from the flurry of posts.... |
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109. 14 May 2010 05:51 | ||
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Morshy: That's a been there/done that. A little more imagination next time please. |
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110. 14 May 2010 07:53 | ||
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Doug: If you have nothing constructive to say, don't say anything. It's not a "been there/done that" story. I've never written anything like it before. If you didn't like it, just say: I didn't like that. But please don't presume to know anything about my imagination, or anything besides. First time, after having posted something, that I've felt like never posting again. Thanks for that. |
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111. 14 May 2010 10:12 | ||
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morshy, That just means you hit a nerve. Happens to us all. I found your story very unique - green room, staging area, orange jumpsuits. And I've been there too. Stick around. |
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112. 14 May 2010 10:24 | ||
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Also, the best works are either loved or hated. Banned in Boston and praised in Cleveland. The worst are when people say "That was OK." |
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113. 14 May 2010 11:46 | ||
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morshy: Didn't mean to step on anyone's toes. ThinkWrite is not a love fest. Critiquing stories has been part of ThinkWrite since the beginning. So this story wasn't something I liked, big deal. Write another one. |
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114. 14 May 2010 12:48 | ||
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Doug, my rising sign is Cancer, so I'm kind of a gentle mommy type. I did like morshy's story - matter of taste. |
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115. 14 May 2010 19:40 | ||
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I did like Morsy's story too, I found myself thinking of Running Man all throughout it though it was definitly original. If you want to know the truth I was thinking "Damn, I wanted to do a to-the-death-compition story" but I don't think I'll try to compete with that one. |
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116. 14 May 2010 20:56 | ||
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Great postings and stories! |
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117. 14 May 2010 21:11 | ||
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Morshy: Nice. I found it compelling. But it was the concept that was compelling - not the character. I kinda hope he gets his. |
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118. 14 May 2010 21:32 | ||
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See Morshy it looks like I've been outnumbered on this one. On second look the depth of your story in such a tight word constraint was very good. It reminded me of another movie (the name escapes me right now) that is truly one of my favorites. Would love to see another story from you and for you to keep contributing to ThinkWrite in the future. I'm sorry! |
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119. 15 May 2010 00:08 | ||
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318 w/o title. Not great, but letting it out anyway. |
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120. 15 May 2010 01:49 | ||
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Doug. When I gave you the gooey torch to add more responsibility into your overburdened life, this is what I expected. Bwaaa ha ha ha ha. |