midnightpoet
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Okay, I finally have a free second, so here are my comments.
Robin, “How I Died, by an Old Lady†was absolutely hilarious. It was a great take on a funny song, and I loved the piece. But as that song has always creeped me out in a weird way, I cannot pick it.
Ron, I quite enjoyed “Route 204 Is Icy As Hellâ€. It captured the essence of teenagers today, I think…but as I’ve never read Catcher in Rye, I don’t quite get the reference, so, alas, I cannot choose that one. “Why We Fight†was good also. But it didn’t hold anything for me, sorry.
Mebu, “Small Town Murder†was wonderful, and right up my alley. I love stories about gruesome murders. And the way the ending tied back to the beginning was wonderful. But can I pick it? I don’t know. I’ll come back.
Charity, “Tea Time†was something I could really identify with, as was “Adult ADDâ€. They both could be stories from my life, and they were quite well written. I’m going to have to give them both another read before I make my decision.
Dragon, I LOVED “Ruminations on a Life Unlived.†I did see the ending coming, but I loved it anyway. This one probably would be my pick if it weren’t for the fact that I chose you as the torch bearer last time I bore the torch. It wouldn’t seem just to me to pick you again.
Five, your ability to write dialog always amazes me. “Papers†was no exception. I could feel the tension between the two, and it felt so real. I don’t know what else to say about it. It was superb, as all your pieces are.
Login, the ending on “Colour My World†was a shock to me, but as I reread it, I see the implications of it in the story. I can even excuse you for editing out two of the words because the story was so great.
Ztormy (aka Mommy), I loved “The Gossip Millâ€. I felt like I was sitting across from a gossipy woman as she told me this tale in quick sentences with a gleam in her eye. I can’t pick you because you’re my mom and that would be favoritism, but I did love the story.
And there, all my comments on all the stories. Now back to give my favorites another read, and I’ll have a new torch bearer soon.
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